Oxygen 1.0

I did want this to be my best work to date, it probably still is, the background kinda lets it down, hence the "1.0". If i can make a better BG at somepoint, i'll definiatly repost it.

I think this is my 3rd or 4th attempt ever at fancy pants shading, last time was about 2-3 years ago lol

Anyway, heres some crappy writain story (i failed English you may be able to guess)

‘Oh wow!’ exclaimed Yeomi leaning across the walkway ‘Saturn’s rings are really beautiful!’
‘It is quite a view’ agreed Arkei ‘don’t you agree Rin?’
‘Yeah sure, whatever…’ She said flatly while scratching her lower back. ‘Damn suits, next time we do a spacewalk I want prior notice, this thing is crushing my tail!’
‘Well it’s not far now’ Arkei gestured over his shoulder, ‘according to the schismatic’s, the main memory core for this station should be just over there.’
Yeomi looked round ‘And we might find some clues about the Raika Company?’
‘It’s a likely probability’ said Rin hastily, ‘Common; the faster we do this, the faster I can be outta this thing.’ She walked past them both towards where Arkei had gestured.
‘She really doesn’t like having her tail cramped dose she?’ said Yeomi
‘That’s a likely probability’ imitated Arkei flippantly.
‘I am on this channel too Arkei, if I were you…’ the floor shuddered under Rins feet, ‘I’d get your ass over…’ The floor completely gave way and Rin fell from sight.
‘RIN!’ Yeomi and Arkei shouted in unison, they ran up to the gap and saw her lying on the floor just below. The two climbed down to Rins side, Arkei picked her up and leant her on his knee, Rin looked up.
‘This suit… is nothing by trouble…’ She held up her airline, clenched tightly in her left hand to stop the air escaping from her helmet.
‘Yeomi! Quickly, we need to attach the spare line.’
‘Right!’ she detached Rins backpack and hastily as Arkei took the broken airline out of Rins left hand and held her other.
‘Your gonna be alright, we can fix this’ he assured calmly
‘Your poker face… is rubbish’ she smiled as she whispered quietly, as her helmet was slowly running out of breathable air, her grip on his hand loosening ever so slightly.
‘Arkei! I have attached the spare air line, what now?’ Yeomi worried.
‘Ok Rin, were going to get you some air in there, ok?’
‘… sounds good’ she faintly replied
‘Yeomi, since you’re the faster of us, you’ll do the reattaching, I’ll unplug this end in the helmet, and you go right in with the replacement’
‘Right!’ she nodded, they both poised ready for the swap
‘Rin, were gonna count to 3, and on 3, we will swap the lines, exhale if you can alright?’ he instructed.
‘On… 3…’
‘Ok Yeomi… One’ he started
‘Two’ she continued
‘THREE!’ they both chorused

End

What happens next? dont harrass me over it, cause im not saying, just take an educated guess lol

Lunate Epsilon, Yeomi, Rin and Arkei are (c) to me, thiefing = whip of the cane!